Sci-Fi Gang War (for want of a better name)

OOC:

Ok, I've read through this, and if you want I think it can still work. In my opinion the following edits are required:

Keep all posts down to my second

First C&P post needs to die [!]

Minor edit-Martin scripts' post- mention of star destroyers should go [!]

Unrelated post by seathia must go [!]

Keep Chris Wesley's post

James Winters post goes. [!]

Keep my post (the one where I run out of ammo)

Kill Clarke Anderson's post. [!]

Edits to Nora's post- I really don't like this post. I think it worked at the time, because there were so many other ships. But I think it needs to be completely redone, or deleted. My ship was already named and since we were the same team her captain would already know that. Also- Troops couldn't be transported in due to the shields. My men got in using a shuttle- I think I mentioned that somewhere. I'd like an opinion from everyone else, and from Nora on this one.

Delete next Castor post [!]

My post needs editing, I think to leave in the part about my away team and delete mention of crew aboard ship. I don't want attention brought away from the station, but Frost was oblivious to all the other ships, and so never mentioned them.

Final post by Nora needs editing\delting. I think get rid of the stuff about the captain, because he almost became more prominent than Dr Fraser, and I don't think that's right.

The problem with this thread was we were controlling several sets of characters, when the idea was really to have a small group, like Chris'. Nora sent loads of combat troops into the station, which I think messed it up, since the martians were disorganised, and full-on fighting units would simply exterminate them all hands down.

It would be better, in my opinion, if they sent in a shuttle, with supplies, since the base shields were supposed to prevent transporters, and Nora herself as a medic. That way we'd get off of the spaceships and have everypody on the base. Since Frost and his men were in a shuttle bay of some sort this would still work with the story. Since we'd found the last shield relay, the martians would have to burst in at that precise moment, I think, and drive us out before we could destroy it.
Chris Wesly can do what he feels appropriate.

[ November 12, 2003 03:45 PM: Message edited by: Tiberius Frost. ]

[ November 13, 2003 05:26 AM: Message edited by: Martin Scripts ]